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ile de cavalo


ile de cavalo
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著作権: antar antario (antar18) (71)
ジャンル: 場所
メディア: カラー
撮影した年: 2015-11-14
カテゴリー: 日常生活
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
アップロードした日: 2015-12-28 10:48
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before joint the island on a seweet day
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Hello Antar! Fine boat, fine seascape. See You my alternative take in the Workshop, please. Regards!

Hi Antar

A good attempt but it does have issues. You have chosen a difficult time of day, the sun so high has cast a harsh shadow in the boat and the stern is over exposed. The horizon isn't level and is in the middle of the photo, which, normally produces a static image. Using the rule of thirds would improve the composition.

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 808 W: 26 N: 792] (8960)
  • [2015-12-30 13:55]

Hi Antar,
almost a good photo, Bob has already highlighted the main issues, I believe the composition could have been improved by moving the PoV to your left a few paces, this would be better balanced with the island more to the left and boat to the right whereas they are now in line down the centre of the shot
Jack

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