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In my eyes


In my eyes
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著作権: Sabina Yamamoto (devylla) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 345 W: 17 N: 161] (1431)
ジャンル: 人間
メディア: 白黒
撮影した年: 2008-04-12
カテゴリー: 日常生活Portrait
カメラ: Canon EOS 40D, Cannon EFS 17-85mm
Exposure: f/20.0, 1/25 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
アップロードした日: 2008-04-13 16:48
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Until now I did't enjoy it to take self portraits.
And a few days ago I give it a try.
I did't want it to take a full portrait :).
So what do you think?


You're graceful, your grace falls,
down around me in my eyes.
You're lovely, your love leaves,
So slightly in my eyes.

Another day left waiting,
alone in my room with no calls from you.
So I call you up, but you let me down,
falling down around everyone except yourself.

I thought that this would never end,
things were so clear but they fell through.
High hopes of problems never failed,
thinking of the best.

You're graceful, your grace falls,
down around me in my eyes.
You're lovely, your love leaves,
So slightly in my eyes, in my eyes.

Another day left crying,
with you in my room with nothing left to do.
You say that it's not right, you said its over now.
Stand still annoyed with no one around.

I thought that this would never end,
things were so clear but they fell through.
High hopes of problems never failed,
thinking of the best.

You're graceful, your grace falls,
down around me in my eyes.
You're lovely, your love leaves,
So slightly in my eyes.

You're graceful, your grace falls,
down around me in my eyes.
You're lovely, your love leaves,
So slightly in my eyes.(Rufio-In my eyes)







pp work

desaturation
antique photo effect
frame-film mark

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is it you??.. well, Sabina.. i dont wanna make you so much compliments.. but.. this portrait makes me think that you are beautiful.. ;)
i like the crop.. i think crop its an effective tecnique to make wonderful selfportaits.. and this is well taken.. creating the right attention to some details.. eyes.. eyesbrow.. the sight..
wonderful idea.. really effective!! thanks
ciao Marco

Hi Sabina,
Very good tight cropping and creative border. Good tonal range and contrast. Well composed! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

Hi Sabina,
What a superb self portrait vith good eyes.Excellent presented.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

I like it
and you worked it very well.
Good idea.

return
ciao
Lucio

Hi Sabina,

Lovely eyes . . Well done on the PP work to make it antique . .
A bit soft . . maybe it's your preference . .
I agree with Marco's comment, you are beautiful . .
Great idea of presenting self . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

:-)) will be back this afternoon

Bravo! Excelenta expresia ochilor, imi plac si versurile din nota. ** ;)
Diana

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1583 W: 40 N: 3488] (13942)
  • [2008-04-14 7:37]

Hi Sabina
From what I see you look like a pretty gal. Those eyes the seductive kind that will turn many men's heads.
Its a good self portrait the only thing that bugs me is the
left side of the face, the little squares running under and over your eye I find a bit distracting. I think its part of the frame unless you have tatoos.
TFS
Dot

Excellent powerful work Sabina,
I like the raw film like edges,
The expression fo the eyes.
Great work.
- Vincent

Hello Sabina,

Beautiful poem, lovely eyes and a very good job! Congratulations and TFS,
Sergio

hi sabina!
i got very happy when i see your comment for my first posting,tnx.
this is a amazing self portrait, expressive eyes and very good pp work.
TFS.
i hope to see your comments again!
iman

Hi there Sabina!
Now im imagining how beautiful you are! :)
maybe you could post a portrait with your whole face!
i know al of us wanted it... ;)
i cant wait to see it! lol!

Ei all! Who wants to see it????
im raising my two hands! lol!
Congratulations!

Ollie DLC
Later my friend! ;)

Hello Sabina,
Good project and realisation.
Well done self portrait. It's a masterpiece.
Congratulations.
Thanks for poem too
Selahattin E

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27559)
  • [2008-04-17 1:52]

Hi Sabina ,
two beautiful and emotionel eyes.Beautiful self portrait.Congratulations.Necla.

Hi Sabina,
very nice unusual composition, a superb self-portrait!
well done,
TFS,

Armel.

Hello Mrs. Yamamoto.
This is a very apart self portrait. Not really to my taste, but that was sure not your intention, haha.
I readed you intro. Like the story. Sure its another life to live in Japan.
Very best wishes and see you later here on TL
Regards from Jan

Hello Sabina,

I like this pov alot well composed and captured photo excllent pp work with great old photo look, excellent work

TFS Kyle

Ol Sabina

Nice to meet you. Your portait is really great. The crop is fabulous. a beautiful portrait of a very interesting person. It must be great to was born in Romania and felt in love in japan.

My regards

teresat

Beautiful story telling portrait.

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