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Yellow in the grass


Yellow in the grass
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著作権: Sabina Yamamoto (devylla) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 345 W: 17 N: 161] (1431)
ジャンル: 場所
メディア: カラー
撮影した年: 2008-04-29
カテゴリー: 日常生活自然
カメラ: Canon EOS 40D, Cannon EFS 17-85mm
Photo Version: Original Version
アップロードした日: 2008-04-30 5:24
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Yesterday was a day off so I went for a picnic in a parck with my family.
I found this little flower in the grass...I find it pretty and sweet:)
Hope you like it too.
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merhaba dear sabina
beautiful nature and wonderful yellow flower.well done.
best regards.
grkan ak軋kır.

Hello Sabina,

Lovely lonely yellow flower. Excellent job with beautiful natural BG. Well done!
Congratulations and TFS,
Sergio

Great placement of the focused area around this flower Sabina.
It is a sweet flower among the grass. I like the hopeful color.
Well done. - Vincent

Hi devylla,
I like this little flower very much!It's so lovely!

Shane.

Hello Sabina,
It looks like we are posting the same flower today ... mine not in full bloom yet? I'm wondering what flower it is. Your photo shows how small it is growing among the grass. Regards. Latiff.

PS: Not the same number of petals ... so it must be a different flower.

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1583 W: 40 N: 3488] (13942)
  • [2008-04-30 8:10]

Hi Sabina
The flower is sharp and stands out.
There is a lot of crab grass and imho a light vignetting would add to center the flower a bit more.
Good shot
Dot

Hello Sabina.
I like the small yellow flower among grass. good lighting and clear image.
Regards,
Sharina

HI Sabina,
very nice and interesting image,
beautifull little yellow flower, nicely seen and taken, very well!
TFS

Regards!

Hi Sabina,
What a stunning minimalistic composition..Excellet POV, colours, light and details..TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

Hello Sabina. Well spotted of this small yellow flower anf I find it pretty too. Pleasant lighting and depth. Well done and thanks for sharing. Best regards. Jusni

Hi Sabina,

You did great capturing it with low level angle . . just a bit too small as compare to the whole frame . . you may go closer to it, and it will make the flower stands out from the surrounding . .
Hope you don't mind I make suggestion . .
If you love capturing small thing or flowers or products, I suggest to have 100mm macro lens . . This is the one I love . . always bring this lens where ever I go . .
Lovely DoF . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Many thanks for your kind words on Racing .

Hi there Sabina!
Yah its really a cute flower! i really love yellow flowers! beautifully captured and framed!
Congratulations!

Ollie DLC

ah Sabina.. really tender.. little and cool!! i love it!! the yellow is exlated in a good way.. minimalistic and effective!! thanks ;))
ciao Marco

Hi Sabina,
Nice capture ... well seen. I like how the color contrast of the flower from the surrounding grass made it stand out. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

si mie imi plac minunatiile astea mici! :) ai stat si tu pe burta, sa vezi floarea din unghiul asta? :))))
Diana
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Hello Sabina,
Really a sweet one this humble flower. I liked peripheral blur effect.
TFS
Selajhattin E

Hi Sabina,
Wonderful nature shot,great focus on your main subject.Good POV and DOF.
Nicely taken and well framed too.

Anan

Thanks for your kind words on my "INSECT 2"

Foarte frumoasa captura floarii galbene, Sabina! Bun POV si claritate, de asemenea, lumina e buna, ceea ce as mai fi facut eu, mai taiam putin de jos si din stanga pentru a o descentra mai mult. Excelent frame.
O saptamana faina,
Sorina

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