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Summer in the countryside


Summer in the countryside
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著作権: Lucja Kozuchowska (luciola) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 166 W: 0 N: 20] (1192)
ジャンル: 場所
メディア: カラー
撮影した年: 2016-07-05
カテゴリー: 日常生活
Exposure: f/5.3, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
アップロードした日: 2016-07-05 9:57
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[Note Guidelines] アーティストからのコメント [Polish]
Great summer in the countryside. Contented cows lie and chew. Total relaxation.
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Hi Lucja

Please understand that this is my opinion as a keen amateur only. Many may disagree, and, of course, you can disagree as well.

I'm afraid the overcast day has produced flat light which has resulted in a flat photo. Low lying sun from the side would produce some interesting shadows, add depth and interest. The cows are too centrally placed, which has also made the photo less interesting.

Sorry to be so negative.

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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 120 N: 47] (244)
  • [2016-07-07 6:52]

Country side is lovely. You have good contrast and Depth of Field and very little to distract the eye away from the main focal point. What you could try is to frame the picture a bit differently. Rather then having the object in the centre, in this case I would suggest an off-centre position, with the cows more to the right in the picture and more landscape to the left. This will create a diagonal line and make it appear as if the cows are looking into the landscape. It is not much one can do about an overcast sky but if you have an opportunity to take a similar picture during the early morning of afternoon on a sunny day it would be well worth it.

A very natural image of Summer in the countryside and farm life has been captured also the day lights are very natural well done
LUCJA KOZUCHOWSKA

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