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Portrait
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著作権: Aleksandar Jovanovic (ackovr) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 0] (68)
ジャンル: 人間
メディア: 白黒
撮影した年: 2014-03-25
カテゴリー: Portrait
カメラ: Nikon D-70s
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/15 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
アップロードした日: 2014-03-26 6:27
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Hi Aleksander

Please understand I'm not an expert on photography, especially portraits. Also these are my opinions only and are meant to be constructive and not malicious.
I think the light is a little flat giving little definition to his face. Also you used a focal length of 26mm which has made his arm look too big and would also slightly distort his face. I believe a focal length of about 50mm is best. Also there are no catch lights in his eyes which make them look a little lifeless.

I hope you don't mind but I've done a workshop just to see if I could improve the photo somewhat.

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