|著作権： Aleksandar Jovanovic (ackovr)
|カメラ： Nikon D-70s|
|Exposure： f/5.0, 1/15 seconds|
|More Photo Info： [view]|
|Photo Version： Original Version, Workshop|
|アップロードした日： 2014-03-26 6:27|
Please understand I'm not an expert on photography, especially portraits. Also these are my opinions only and are meant to be constructive and not malicious.
I think the light is a little flat giving little definition to his face. Also you used a focal length of 26mm which has made his arm look too big and would also slightly distort his face. I believe a focal length of about 50mm is best. Also there are no catch lights in his eyes which make them look a little lifeless.
I hope you don't mind but I've done a workshop just to see if I could improve the photo somewhat.