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Tine Tunnel

Tine Tunnel
著作権: Gary Johnson (Ash249) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 124 W: 58 N: 193] (1712)
ジャンル: 場所
メディア: 白黒
撮影した年: 2005-04-09
カテゴリー: Abstract
カメラ: Fuji S7000z, Raynox DCR250 Macro lens
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/8 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Fork Lore [view contributor(s)]
アップロードした日: 2005-05-12 15:52
ページビュー: 3850
お気に入り: 1 [view]
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Ok, this is my first image on here, so go easy :)

True story about the concept of the image: I was washing the breakfast things one morning, specifically the forks; I looked at the prongs (tines) and being in a creative mood, decided to do an abstract macro using the forks as a tunnel, hence the title; Tine Tunnel.
It's not a true B&W image, only the original de-saturated, I think it works well.

Critique/comments welcome.


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  • DAM Gold Star Critiquer [C: 513 W: 67 N: 268] (1110)
  • [2005-05-12 15:55]

First of all... WELCOME to TL this is a great community of photographers and you'll enjoy it. Your first entry to this site is very nice. Nice tones, sharp and very well composed. The shadows are delicate and the reflections on them are nicely placed. Good job... can't wait to see your future entries. Thanks


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  • Pete Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 32 W: 0 N: 12] (270)
  • [2005-05-12 15:56]

Interesting idea, well taken, I think it works well too. Nice picture

Hi Gary, welcome to TL !!! A great idea and execution. yes, b/w works well, but maybe there could be some more contrast. I have done a quick workshop to show what I mean

Well done and looking forward to seeing more of your work.


Hi Gary!
welcome on TL! great composition, good idea, great work, give us more like this
Thanks for sharing

Hi Gary,
This is very original and fun. Great sharpness an DOF. Well done.

what a clever title! nice clean shot, well-composed and executed. keep 'em coming! regards, ck

Hi Gary, good picture for your introduction to this page, welcome to TL. Composition well thought and creative idea. Saludes, Iris

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  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1134 W: 420 N: 1093] (6670)
  • [2005-05-12 16:45]

Welcome on TL Gary,You created a nice depht here using the pattern you did...very good DOF too and original subject ..you did great !

Go easy with what? The points? :) Great shot, great shadows, DOF and composition. Simple but effective-very well done.
Welcome to TL

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  • tinman Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 417 W: 8 N: 221] (1622)
  • [2005-05-12 17:13]

Gary - for a starter, you now have a huge problem to keep this std up! This is great photography. Great depth of field DOF and shadow control. Well done and welcome. Tim

  • jcandeli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 853 W: 100 N: 348] (3985)
  • [2005-05-12 17:23]

Cool idea! Nicely done. Points tomorrow!JP

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  • aran Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 123 W: 21 N: 19] (396)
  • [2005-05-12 17:25]

Hi, and welcome, to be your first shot it is sincerely great. I love the definition of it and the idea is very original, and of course the composition too. Congatulations for your critics.

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  • Gand Gold Star Critiquer [C: 355 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-05-12 17:31]

Welcome on TL Gary!
Great photo for entry.
CU around.

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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 727 W: 3 N: 118] (2478)
  • [2005-05-12 17:53]

Well done.
great idea.
good sharp.

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  • Maru Gold Star Critiquer [C: 471 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-05-12 19:11]

Hi Gary,
great first post in TL, very creative concept with those forks!!
Nice play of light and shadows here. I thing that some more contrast will add more impact to the composition.
Very well done!

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2441 W: 250 N: 873] (8693)
  • [2005-05-12 21:31]

Excellent first post,Gary! Welcome to TL ! This is original and very creative! Beautiful composition! Congratulations! Michel

Very special!
I enjoy it! Clever, original. In fact i didn't know forks can be placed that way. I did with cards or dominos... Never with forks. And it's a good visual! I enjoy it!

So Welcome on TL! :o)

Wow, what an intro! A fantastic image, incredibly creative. I love the shiny forks and the shadow on the table (?). Great dof. Well done and thanks for posting.

Very great picture for a first one ! Great compo and great idea. I prefer without noise (see my workshop). Very well done !

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  • tamori (3)
  • [2005-05-15 3:33]

Hi Gary welcome to TL. great first entry.well composed and very sharp. Works well in BW.TFS.

Regards Tam

excellent graphic macro Gary! very cool idea and terrific execution.. composition is great and the detail super sharp and fine.. love it! well done :-)


Absolutely stunning. Great shot. The clarity, sharpness, tones, composition and concept, all first class work. I must keep my eye on you.

really nice photo. good subject. weel done. hope light will be with u all.

Great one!!! Excellent first post here, welcome!
I love the way you used macro instead of deeper DOF. Great choice! B&W definitely fits here.
Great job done, TFS!

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  • Yacow Gold Star Critiquer [C: 61 W: 0 N: 2] (1798)
  • [2006-03-30 13:32]

great photo....
regards Jacek

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  • ozLem Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor [C: 21 W: 60 N: 6] (48)
  • [2006-06-29 12:41]

Good composition and idea...

Thanks for sharing...


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  • baran Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 82 W: 0 N: 13] (803)
  • [2006-09-14 16:21]

Hi dear Gray
your view is very good..excellent abstract you made dear friend
i like b/w mode and DOF snd composition
all the best

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  • mperla Silver Star Critiquer [C: 30 W: 1 N: 5] (222)
  • [2006-09-29 5:56]
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ver very very nice. idea +++++++

Beautiful image. Great composition, DOF and tones.

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  • Alita Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 157 W: 29 N: 0] (917)
  • [2006-12-20 12:44]
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Hi Gary,
great idea and execution!
I like the lighting here,
spectacular shot,
best regards!

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  • Niva Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1123 W: 2 N: 876] (11862)
  • [2007-03-19 21:24]

A tine tunnel , a great idea!
Congratulations, parab駭s!
From Recife,

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  • tyro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 213 W: 93 N: 875] (4422)
  • [2007-03-21 7:25]

Eight forks for breakfast and yet you all eat boiled eggs? Mmmm. This is a wonderful and clear macro shot and well deserves all the praise it has received.

Best Wishes,


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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 710 W: 2 N: 153] (4208)
  • [2008-02-09 2:56]

excellent arrangement
good idea

Hello Gary

WOW ! Compliments for your first image on TL
Elegant and ARTistic realization.
Clever use of light and shadows.
Excellent idea , perfect DOF.

wow so simple yet so beautiful shot very creative thoughts.


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