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著作権: Lisa Williams (lisapw1) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 778 W: 102 N: 1602] (8893)
ジャンル: 人間
メディア: 白黒
撮影した年: 0000
カテゴリー: HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Photo Version: Original Version
アップロードした日: 2008-10-15 18:15
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My mood......

"Solitude shows us what we should be; society shows us what we are." ....Richard Cecil

"The divine guidance often comes when the horizon is the blackest"....Mohandas Karamchand (Mahatma) Gandhi

Cropped original photo, changed to black and white, added contrast, deleted unwanted items in hallway.

thank you for your comments, critiques, and workshops, Lisa

naseer-afg, wilth, shelbeesmom, szatanowska, pikas, mark25, ll_IcE_EyeZ_ll, daisydaisy has marked this note useful
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  • tty007 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 198 W: 64 N: 185] (2599)
  • [2008-10-15 18:19]

This is really nice. Sharp, create composition. REally nice picture. You would have put a dot as your title and I would have said hey that's a story that talk about solitude. Very well done! Great job!

Excellent and superb BW shot
Well Done,Great POV and compo with nice tones too
Well Job my friend,congrats :)

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  • wilth Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 374 W: 43 N: 520] (2028)
  • [2008-10-15 20:22]
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Hi Lisa,
Very interesting and powerful presentation. The picture is the title and really does convey the mood.
Not only the composition but also your processing.
Very nicely done,

very hard and interesting contrasts, the part of black on the left is too important IMO, however a very good subject captured

I love being alone, it's a very recouperative time! Love this Lisa! Nice hey key approach here, nice details! Very different for you! I like it!

  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3627 W: 881 N: 2607] (21386)
  • [2008-10-16 5:51]
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Hi Lisa !

I like very much this. Very different from your usual works
Well done !

ps.You are not alone; we are here.

Hi Lisa,
Grat shot, good sharp details and good PP work, I would have maybe cropped about 3/4 of the black area on the left away.
Well done
Regards Andy

hi lisa.
absolutely superb.
one of the best bw pics i have seen for a long time.

i like the symbolism.
the large patch of black could be seen as a long period of sadness. then, all of a sudden, brightness. a possible light at the end of a long tunnel. unfortunately it is short lived and life descends back into the darkness of despair.

that is how i see this.
foreboding and moody.

i am in awe.

wow Lisa!

this is really artistic and creative work..
beautiful quotes i agree with them..
Great compo and shadows&lights language here:)

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1317 W: 129 N: 3792] (15759)
  • [2008-10-17 13:21]

Hello Lisa
I like this change of the normal from you.. the BW is very strong and the subject imo matches your mood/title...


U chose nice words for description of this shot. Well done

Hi Lisa...nice composition..the high contrast black and white works well here...nice work.


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  • pikas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 154 W: 9 N: 277] (1105)
  • [2008-10-18 1:09]
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Hello Lisa,

Fantastic original idea,

Very nice ligth and shadow. Amazing title!!!

Great job.



Hello Lisa! Wonderful POV, original composition, perfect capture. Ideal contrast. Great effect. Good luck!

Really nice Lisa, really nice.

Great mood with the B&W, and I really like the composition.. The high contrast is ideal for this scene.

Excellent work with the mood here Lisa.
Great graphic design asthetic as well as a great photo.
Nicely done.
- Vincent

Excellent work dear friend!Nice mood!

Hi Lisa,
This photo caught my attention very easily. Great framing and lighting capture. Well done!!

Greetings Lisa
I took your advise and enjoyed the first page of your gallery. Had to open this beautiful B & W. Lighting well managed - sharp and clear composition. Bravo


one of the most impressive black and white photos i have seen :) simple, effective and well taken :)

i love it :) wish it belonged to me :)

muhammad muhsin

Lisa, thanks for commenting on one of my photos. It gave me a chance to peruse your extensive gallery of photos, which I thorougly enjoyed. This is another wonderful study in B&W plus I really like the quotes you offered in your notes. I look forward to more new photos from you.



Wow ... Love this scene, superb b&w atmosphere, love the use of contrasts and the rendering of light.
Excellent work in my opinion.
I would have liked to photograph this moment.
"Etre solitaire est un choix, la solitude ne l'est pas"
Being lonely is a choice; loneliness is not.
Very well done.

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