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s y l w i a


s y l w i a
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著作権: Barbara Was (modliszka) (1360)
ジャンル: 人間
メディア: カラー
撮影した年: 2006-07-14
カテゴリー: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
アップロードした日: 2006-07-27 11:55
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wow nice colors.
i like the composition,great DOF.

pretty model.

a note would help

regards

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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 120 N: 47] (244)
  • [2006-07-27 12:31]

A very straight forward potrait. In a way you feel connecte dwith the model. You are drawn in to the picture in a way. I think this has a big part due to that she seem very relaxed and open. She feels comfortable with you. A bit of warmer colours woudl have been nice though. As she is in the shades she miss having that warm evenign light shining on her.

Hi Barbara,

Well done on the capture.
A slight crop and color balance will enhance the image. I did a workshop for you.

Mike

Although at first I could agree with ZTO about the warmer colours, I believe these colours could well be natural (late afternoon/early evening ?) Fascinating model, and well pictured too ;-)
TFS

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  • imel Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 26 W: 30 N: 1] (566)
  • [2006-07-27 14:53]

Kompozycyjnie podoba sie, ale kolorystycznie jest stanowczo jest za zimne. Skra ma odcien lekko purpurowo-siny. Jakby zdjecie bylo kolorystycznie takie jak w workszopie to bylo by extra, a tak jest tylko dobrze + :) IMHO oczywiscie :)

excellent shot, nice colors, a very beautiful model, congratulations

Nice model & light. I would like to see a bit of her legs to give it some dimention/perspective.

Ben.

Hello Barbara,
Good photo and good medel. TFS.
Mehmet

Very nice..
Good DOF and pose
\A bit tighter perhaps..
MAtt

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