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Just One
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著作権: sarah motallebi (baran) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 82 W: 0 N: 13] (803)
ジャンル: 場所
メディア: カラー
撮影した年: 2007-03-23
カテゴリー: 自然
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
アップロードした日: 2007-03-25 10:09
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お気に入り: 1 [view]
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camera:nikon D 80
lens:nikkor 18 - 135 mm
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hi sarah!
very beautiful photo with beautiful colors and DOF, excellent work.
tfs
zoran

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 136 N: 1263] (6138)
  • [2007-03-25 10:24]

Hi Sarah,
excellent close up, the DOF is very well choosen. You isolated this flower very well from the rest of the field. Lovely sharpness and the colors are fabulous. Composition and presentation are great.
Sky

Bonjour Sarah
Only one word cheer ! all is it there closed up, colours, is perfect. It's beautiful spring photographs
TFS
Corinne

Hi Sarah,
Very nice, I like the vibrant color composition. Perfect focusing and sharpness. Good use of natural light and nice frame.
Thanks for sharing!
Leanne

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  • shahx Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 34 N: 58] (662)
  • [2007-03-25 10:40]

Amazing clarity. I love the contrast of yellow and blue. Good DOV. and focus.

Beautiful.....

awesome colours....
congrats!!!!

Hi Sarah,

you did a very good photograph here. The light is marvelous and the blue and yellow colors are so pleasant to see, the sharoness is also perfect.

But I have a critic about the compo. By placing your flower in the middle you don't give it all the importance it could have. By using the rule of third your photo could be better. In my POV, the large black strip take to much importance and disturb.

So I made a little workshop to illustrate my POV. Hope you will like it. ANd for the colors and sharpness I still give you 2 smilies. =8-))

very good framing sarah :)
details and colors are superb
very good DOF

well done :)

koh

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  • tracer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 748 W: 45 N: 1650] (8284)
  • [2007-03-25 11:44]

nice yellows and such excellent separation. framing is just right

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1320 W: 31 N: 1634] (9994)
  • [2007-03-25 11:56]

lovely colours, excellent DOF and POV

TFS

Karan

salam sara

eidetoon mubarak....

i like thi shot..the colors are amzing...

nice DOF

age mitonesty az ye zaveye begiri ke on chize sefide nayofte fekr konam aks yekam yeknavakht tar mishod...any way...well done...

FarFar

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  • kev Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 13 W: 17 N: 19] (124)
  • [2007-03-25 15:12]

hello sarah,
very beautiful and sharp, with nice background colours!
kev

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  • Iria Gold Star Critiquer [C: 51 W: 0 N: 0] (797)
  • [2007-03-27 8:29]

Very interesting textures. Excellent.

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  • Alita Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 157 W: 29 N: 0] (917)
  • [2007-03-29 11:11]

Hi Sarah,
Great compo and fantastic colors!
best regards!

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  • Tzazu Gold Star Critiquer [C: 266 W: 31 N: 77] (3500)
  • [2007-03-29 11:21]

Simple is the beautiful true.
Very, very good work!
Take care,
Arantxa

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3627 W: 881 N: 2607] (21386)
  • [2007-03-31 5:08]

Wonderful shot, Sarah !
Superb blue&yellow compo and light.
Congrats !


v

like this.

crazy dof is good to fit.

thnks for sharing.

Very cool dof!! One of the best I've seen of this for a while now. Congrats. TFS

Hi Sarah,

Wonderful picture! It is soothing and vibrant.

TFS

Dirk

Excellent contrast in colors. DOF and compositions are perfect! Well done!

-JD

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  • arzu (96)
  • [2007-05-23 16:05]

wow! really great. wonderfull colors, focusing and sharpnes. Thanks for sharing :)

so nice & warm colors

Good subject sharpness and DOF!

Superbe, belle gestion de la PDC

Hi sarah ,
Nice work with lovely composition.

Regards
Saeed

beautiful, I love the colours. SOmething I needed for a grey, dull winter day in Poland...

Gorgeous shot Sarah....
The very blur background is just perfect. You threw them out of focus really well....
GREAT SHOT!!

Hi!
Wonderful shot!!! Lovely close up and great colors in the BG! Lovely presentation too! Love the frame! TFS, Have a good day!
Best regards! Carine

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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3812 W: 2533 N: 15] (70)
  • [2010-03-02 15:42]

Hello Sarah,

Great focus, excellent BG, nice frame!
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

(*) Sorry, but I haven't more smiles today.

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