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mother and son


mother and son
写真に関する情報
著作権: Tony Pavone (tonycongo) (118)
ジャンル: 人間
メディア: カラー
撮影した年: 2007-08
カテゴリー: Portrait
カメラ: Canon XTi, Canon 17-85 f/4-5.6 IS USM
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
アップロードした日: 2008-08-14 7:08
ページビュー: 2958
ポイント: 18
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Mother and her son at the beach. Portrait. 17-85mm
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interesting shot Tiny
nice idea , but you miss the background
regards
T

Hi Tony
photo is very original and white background is perfect
I like very much the light and the sharpness
ciao
Lucio

Excellent and superb portrait photography - C my PS work!!

Very good indeed.

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  • cngray Silver Star Critiquer [C: 24 W: 1 N: 6] (178)
  • [2008-08-14 10:16]
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Tony,
This is beautiful! Even though theres lack of background, the mother and son make up for it!
great job
cngray

Hello Tony!
Good picture, really soft and calm.
They're looking like angels ;-)
Regards,
R.

Well they're a handsome pair, nicely coordinated in white against a blown-out background, there are ingredients here for a terrific shot.

Your composition is ok, except for the woman's chopped-off fingers, and the tilted horizon.

Actually with some more careful pp work I think this could be improved hugely.

Rew

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer [C: 3409 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2008-08-22 5:22]

Hello Tony.
Lovely skintan on both. Nice and sharp.
Two criticts, The water is not level and better if the mother and son where placed at the right side, so more distance to go out of the picture.
Best regards from Jan

Hello (again) Tony,
Besides the already mentioned flaws (tilted horizon and cropped fingers), I think this picture conveys a strong mood.
You captured your two models at the right moment: the looks in their eyes suggest everything we can imagine about the relationship between a mother and her little son. Really very touching.
Personally, I very much like the "empty" space on the right side. It is not only original (most would have put that space on the left side), but because of its peculiar placement, it also gives a kind of "aura" to these two human beings: an aura of humanity, as if an immense and respectful silence was following their passing by...
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

beautiful moment captured here!

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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3812 W: 2533 N: 15] (70)
  • [2009-06-23 18:45]

Hello Tony,

The photo is very original and the white background works well here.
I like very much the light and the sharpness
The mother and the boy are beautiful people.
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

Hi . interesting shot with perfect exp control... good luck.

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