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Away from you

Away from you
著作権: Toca Vlad (czoka) (297)
ジャンル: 人間
メディア: 白黒
撮影した年: 2005-10
カテゴリー: 日常生活
カメラ: Canon Rebel EOS 300D, Canon 35-80 USM
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
アップロードした日: 2005-12-18 16:39
ページビュー: 2345
ポイント: 18
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Hi toca and welcome on tl!
thatエs a great first shot, i like the compo and her expression a lot, it has feelings and mood.
best regards,

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  • bult Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 162 W: 16 N: 78] (1041)
  • [2005-12-18 16:54]
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I love the emptiness on the left side. Combined with the short DOF and partial desaturation it gives the face the expression it deserves.

And welcome to TL of course!

No comment, other than way from you? Great use of DOF. I've tried a workshop - see what you think...

Excellent shot!! wow.. what a way to start with..
I love its composition,, look at her face full of sorrow..full of experssion,
I like PP work too
welldone Toca.. you are a creative artist.
thanks for sharing

Emotion is obvious here and that is what is so captivating. Balance of the picture and color emphasis adds a heightened sense contemplation and the forethought of the photographer. I really like it! Look forward to seeing more from you! Welcome.

Hello and welcome on TL!
Here is a good start.I like your composition,the choice of the total empty space on the left,the light,the tone,the PP for the blue shirt,the perfect sharpness.
really well done.
Regards and Merry xmas...Francesco

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  • lukdm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 332 W: 3 N: 21] (1350)
  • [2005-12-18 18:23]

very nice portrait Toca

Nice capture and i like her face expression .
Background blurred...
Good one.

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 896 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2005-12-19 10:34]

excelenta! inca o data premiu cu coronita!:)
bravo, Vlad! tine-o tot asa!

  • HIMself Gold Star Critiquer [C: 314 W: 5 N: 9] (3605)
  • [2006-03-13 14:43]

good pleasure and efects of the colours
interesting picture
regards for you

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